Hello Readers

I am temporarily deleted this story. Will put it back on by the end of September 2014.

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10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. KP
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 15:17:29

    You have left the story at a tantalisingly inconclusive stage leaving the readers to imagine the various possibilities that Tejas’s final words would indicate.A beautiful love story that is atonce gentle and sensual.

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  2. Krupa
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 15:42:14

    Lovely Story Meera, grasped my attention till the end. Loved the ending, left to our imagination as KP says

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  3. Meera
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 15:55:23

    Looks like both KPs think alike 🙂 Thank you!!!

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  4. Harish
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 16:04:38

    Awesome story. Vivid & vivacious again. Lovely writing.

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  5. Asha
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 19:05:31

    So beautiful- as always!

    And my favorite line was ” I disliked obviously beautiful women like her who tried to defy the aging process.” 😉

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  6. Meera
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 21:10:54

    Thanks Asha. And about your favorite line .. well let me say, it is also mine! Sometimes the author speaks too strongly through a character 🙂

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  7. Meera
    Sep 25, 2013 @ 21:13:00

    Folks I am copying a comment from my friend Anindita who for some reasons is unable to post comments on this blog ” I loved the story Meera… the ending left me speechless. It is positive and at the same time sad. -“do naina rakh dijio mohe piya milan ki aas” Thanks Ani

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  8. renu
    Sep 26, 2013 @ 10:08:08

    very interesting and romantic..

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  9. mahesh
    Nov 04, 2013 @ 14:05:42

    Lovely 🙂 hope lies eternal!!!

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  10. Ram Sharaph
    Nov 13, 2013 @ 19:56:30

    Really wonderful. Literally stumbled on your blog. You have a simple writing style but a powerful style of narrative that is at once engaging. The short story is my favourite format and your stories are the best I have read in a while. Loved the way you conveyed the innocence of adolescence conveyed in one simple sentence: will you wait for me until I grow up? And another: let’s go and have coffee. We have a lot to talk about. Conveys so much.

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